We must say that we could find no fault in the story Sherwin Long did for C News on the US stock market crash.
The story had all the right elements...coherent and relevant soundbites, good audio and video (nice touch to use CMMB's scrolling stock board), and best of all Sherwin, a good standup!
Practice makes perfect. We have been hard on you in the past because we know you can do much better.
BTW, it's good practice to stand still for a few extra seconds at the end of your standup for the sake of your cameraman.
We caught you moving almost as soon as you ended your tag.